Tuesday, April 14, 2009

Monday, April 13, 2009.

Switch papers with one of your peers. Answer these questions:

1) Thesis--good? why? not? why?
2) Find two parts that need transitions and rewrite them with transitions.
3) Make a brief outline of the paper. Which ideas need more development? Which are irrelevant?
4) Is the conclusion effective? Why or why not? Rewrite it with your changes.
5) Is the introduction effective? Why or why not? Rewrite it with your changes.

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